"Harrell's the status quo, and it’s not working," Transit Riders Union leader Wilson says.
Maybe add a KW: before This is personal to me.
I might take issue with "coincidentally, one of the two years in the past 16 that Harrell hasn’t been in office." Seems more causal than coincidental!
Maybe add a KW: before This is personal to me.
I might take issue with "coincidentally, one of the two years in the past 16 that Harrell hasn’t been in office." Seems more causal than coincidental!